Thursday, April 11, 2013

Annotated Bibliography Revision

 
1.The most helpful piece of advice I recieved was all of the comments on the part about each authors argument. I feel like I have a hard time getting out what I'm trying to say when I'm explainging why I think they did a good job at making their point. Having this extra back up now in the argument paragraphs really helps me understand why these articles are so good for my paper.
 
2. The least helpful piece of advice is probably fixing a citation. It was a small mistake so it was very easy to fix.
 
3. I dont feel like I have any questions. I know there is probably always more I can do with my writing so I guess I would like to know exactly where my weakest points are in analyzing articles, and where it shows up in my papers.
 
4. I really tried to answer the questions megan was left with after reading my annotated bibliography. I wanted to put her and the rest of my audience in a position that doesnt leave them with any questions at all. So I really tried to be more descriptive and seperate parts of the authors arguments so they could feel as if they read the article too. This si shown mostly in the second paragraph of each bibliography when talking about the authors argument.

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