In your Visual Analysis, you have more clearly explained your claims about the different parts of the comics. I would have liked to see you pull back and explain how you know that each comic as a whole is arguing for either public or private school.
In your Annotated Bibliography, you have cleared up some confusion in the analysis paragraphs.
In your Argumentative Essay, you use a very effective mixture of pathos and ethos to create a compelling argument. In the future, work on incorporating and explaining your quotations. Right now, your direct quotes feel thrown in randomly with no introduction or explanation.
Dear Madeline,
ReplyDeleteIn your Visual Analysis, you have more clearly explained your claims about the different parts of the comics. I would have liked to see you pull back and explain how you know that each comic as a whole is arguing for either public or private school.
In your Annotated Bibliography, you have cleared up some confusion in the analysis paragraphs.
In your Argumentative Essay, you use a very effective mixture of pathos and ethos to create a compelling argument. In the future, work on incorporating and explaining your quotations. Right now, your direct quotes feel thrown in randomly with no introduction or explanation.
Megan